A few minor mistakes apart, your writing is good.
- À part quelques petites erreurs, ta composition est bonne.
Apart from sports, I like listening to jazz music.
- À part le sport, j'aime écouter du jazz.
Aside from this, he was in good health.
- À part cela, il était en bonne santé.
... And part of why I feel there's a lot of opportunity there. ...
... So I got together with a few people and part of my team and ...